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Wow, this was something different from you (I think).... instead of senseless violence, it has to do with suicide and love. Kind of moving, it would probably be more moving or sad if you put that song "shattered dreams" (or shattered something, forgot exactly what it's called). I just couldn't feel sad with that upbeat Offspring music. And if you really want to make someone cry, really drag it out, like show how nice and lovely she once was when she was alive, before she was this bloody mess. I don't know if you were going for a "sad" thing or just a show-n-tell thing or whatever, but making ppl here cry always seems to get ppl to vote 5's or whatnot. Just look at Mad World (and other suicide-like flashes).... ppl can relate to suicide so much and they love to feel so sad because it relates to the dark side or depression that most ppl have experienced at least once in their lives. Oh, by the way, is this based on a true story (like of yourself), or is it just pure fiction?