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[Trailor (home)]

ok

The drawings were decent, you got your characters, your scenary, you just need to make up any kind of story to tie everything together. A lot of ppl don't like random happenings in flash, but looks like this has potential, work a little more on it, make it longer, or maybe something else. Wasn't quite sure why the clocks were there for.

Sir-Eatsalot responds:

There are a lot of clock lovers... Maybe, the next submition I submit will have a plot... I dunno yet.

[Peanut Butter Jelly 3]

short & funny

Pretty funny audio clip about p & j. Could use a little more animation and some more drawn art instead of just jpg's. It's alright. Good for a quick joke.

format responds:

yep that is exactly what i was aiming for!

[Murray's Guide Updated]

an interesting topic

A cute/funny flash. Getting romance lessons from a duck...funny. That menu music was nice and calming. Oh, I just realized something, it is literally a how to pick up "chicks" thing since these are birds. I think the 2 most useful pieces of advice was the "take it slow" one and the "be yourself" one. The others didn't really seem to matter. For one thing, girls can still hook up with another guy even if they are already with one, well in some instances.

Micromus responds:

Quite true. We could have made the guide a whole lot longer - up to 10 000 tips and longer of course (knowing how little men know about women :p) but we didn't want to end up graphics looking like stick-men and sounds just being missing and all that.
And yeah, some girls might do that, but who'd leave that kinda stud of a kiwi for someone like Murray? ;)

[Final Confrontation]

interesting

Beautiful artwork...that made it all the more enjoyable to watch. Good choice of sound clip. Is there a reason why all the people have white eyes(no pupil/iris)? It seemed like you some good work into the artwork so it seems odd why you wouldn't finish off the eyes unless you intended it to be that way. Nice job!! :)

SketchMichaels responds:

Thanks for the review... I chose to leave out the eyes to signify that people wander aimlessly through life at times, not seeing what's really going on around them, even if they feel something may be wrong.

But maybe that's reading too much into it ;)

[Mitosis]

ugh

Did you do this for a science class? This is too educational, in a boring way. I know what mitosis is, but this was long and dragged out. A nice change to sticks maybe, but you could have presented it a little differently.

Susil responds:

Well, thanksm I guess... I'm hoping yo get really good at flash and hopefully I can come up with a good idea for flash.

[Animations]

it's okay

Good frame by frame animation, but the graphics could use some more work. You got potential to be a good animator. Why don't you show us some of your newer work?

Sherpy-2 responds:

In the works :D

[The Neutral Jedi]

hmm

Not a bad idea, having a jedi that isn't good or bad, just somewhere in between or on his own side. I think the graphics could be better/cleaner. If you have to use sticks, then fine, but spend a little more time on the lightsabers and that gun you had. Put more effort next time.

ClassParody responds:

Just as I told someone else before: I only made this movie to see how well the lightsaber does in a movie. I used simple stickmen just to see how it went with the lightsabers.